The Sea of Storms

(Lodestone: Book One)
by
Mark Whiteway

Virtual Bookworm, April 2010, 278 pp.
ISBN: 978-1-60264-546-2

Genre: Science Fiction

Subgenre: Fantasy
Reviewed: 8/16/2010

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

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Excerpt

Shann reached the apex of her leap.

The Keltar was rising to meet her in the air, readying his staff once more to probe her defences, waiting for her to make a fatal error. His back was turned. Keris saw the opening. She flared her cloak and launched herself skyward. Reaching the top of her leap, she angled her body toward the Keltar, and slammed open her bronze layer. Instantly, she felt the downward pressure of the upper loadstone layer on bronze. She hurtled downwards, feet first. Air rushed past as the pair of cloaked combatants rose to meet her. Keris twisted at the last, feeling resistance, as her boots impacted the Keltar's side. She heard an "oomph" as air was forcibly expelled from the man's lungs. The massive blow sent him tumbling towards the platform out of control, and he landed hard. Keris partially retracted her bronze and slowed her descent, alighting directly in front of the sprawling figure. From the corner of her eye she could see that Shann had landed safely some way off. The girl was breathing hard, but watching the confrontation, intently.

The man turned his face towards Keris. He was young and wiry looking, with fair hair combed straight back. Keris had a flash of recognition. She had seen him at the keep, but could not remember ever speaking to him. He rose to his feet, clutching his side. "You - you are Keris, the traitor."

The word stung Keris in a way she had not expected. It felt like he had somehow turned the tables on her and gained the advantage. She scrambled to maintain her moral footing. "You do not understand what is going on here."

"I understand well enough," the man sneered. "You have sided with these imposters against the Prophet."

"The Prophet is out to destroy all Kelanni," she countered. "You are being used."

"Ridiculous!" the young man spat.

Keris was about to respond, when she felt a pressure wave pass over her. She whirled around just in time to see two soldiers come cart-wheeling through the air. They landed on the stone roof in a tumble of arms and legs.

She looked back along the line of their trajectory. Alondo stood with his boots firmly planted, the open neck of his musical instrument pointed forward. He turned to face two more soldiers who were advancing on him from the side. He adjusted a control and then he struck the strings. Keris watched with disbelief as a shimmering ring rippled through the atmosphere and struck with a force that knocked them backwards. He tweaked the control once more, and commenced a rhythmic strumming. An aerial vortex emanated from the device, twisting in the air like a coiled serpent. The soldiers raised their hands in a vain attempt to resist the force now washing over them. Faces contorted, they turned tail and ran for the rook exit. The other soldiers got to their feet and stumbled after their companions. Lyall chased them with his staff, completing the rout.

Keris was almost as shocked as the soldiers. She had never seen anything like the weapon that Alondo wielded. She gathered her wits, pointing the tip of her staff at the still prone Keltar. "You men are defeated. Yield!"

"Never!" The young man got to his feet and rushed Keris. She sidestepped neatly, swinging her staff and striking him in back with the darkwood. Shann was walking towards them. Keris held up her hand. "Leave him to me."

Dark clouds were rolling in, obscuring the suns and casting the tower in a premature evenfall. The cloaked youth turned again to face her. He laughed mirthlessly. "Others are coming after you. You will not escape." He raised his hand to his neck and leapt away. Keris bent her knees, flared her cloak and jumped into the air after him. He twisted around to face her and she caught the look of pure hatred in his eyes as their staffs clashed.

As she parried a low strike, she heard Lyall shouting from below. She couldn't make out what he was saying, but she detected a note of urgency in his voice. Glancing to one side, she saw smoke billowing from the roof's exit. I have to end this.

 

Synopsis

On the planet Kelanni, the intelligent inhabitants, who have tails and white blood, are ruled by a malevolent leader known as the Prophet. It is rumored that the Prophet does not look like the people of Kelanni and that he has no tail. Some people even believe that he may be from off-world, but no one seems to know the real truth.

The Prophet uses his Keltars to rule over the land, spreading fear and outrage as the Keltar enter villages and steal away many of the young, sometimes killing in the process. The slaves are then herded off to the Lodestone mines to dig for the precious metal. Lodestone, which fall to the planet's surface as meteorites, has the quality of being able to repel itself from other Lodestone. The Keltar use this metal in their winged cloaks to push off from the Lodestone and glide over the country.

Shann is a young woman who is small for her age. She lost both of her parents when she was eight turns old when soldiers, under the order of a Keltar, took her parents away to mine Lodestone. She lives in the town of Corte and works in an inn as a kitchen aide. While standing outside a fruit vendor's stall, she witnesses what she takes to be a Keltar attack another Keltar. She finds this interesting since no Keltar has ever attacked another. The attacking Keltar, who becomes injured in the battle, flees toward her and presses an object into her hand before expanding his cloak, pushing off some Lodestone, and flying away. The other Keltar witnesses the handoff and order his soldiers to capture Shann. Turning around fleeing through the town, Shann realizes that she must not be caught, although she doesn't know why.

Keris is a female Keltar who has been questioning her beliefs in the way of the Keltar. She is starting to doubt that violence and turning the people of Kalanni into slaves is not the best way to live. When she is attacked by a giant bird and rescued by a strange little creature called a Chandara named Boxx, Keris learns about the true plans of the Prophet. She vows then and there to put a stop to his evil plans and save her people. When she is charged with hunting down the false Keltar that attacked one of their own, she uses this opportunity to switch sides and join him.

The false Keltar, a man known as Lyall, has gathered together his friend, Alondo, a musician who is something of an inventor, and Shann, and they head off to save some Lodestone slaves. On their journey, Lyall, who did have some actual training as a Keltar before he turned into a rebel, begins teaching Shann how to use Lodestone to fly. He gives Shann an extra flying cloak and also begins to teach her how to fight.

When Lyall, Alondo and Shann attempt to rescue the slaves, they fall into a trap that has been set for them. They are rescued by Keris and Boxx, who soon join their party, although Shann has a hard time believing that a real Keltar could go against the ruling of the Prophet. She vows to herself that she will keep a close eye on this Keris and doesn't trust her within an inch of her life.

When Lyall, Alondo and Shann learn of the devastating weapon that that the Prophet is attempting to build, they all band together to put a stop to his plans. With Keltar hot on their trail, they make their way across the Eastern Plains, Gillah Hills, Fire Pits of Kharthrun to the Aronak Sea. They must pass through the Sea of Storms to reach their destination. They must safely transverse through the Barrier, where no one has gone before, if they are to succeed. But with the most vicious of the Keltar on their tails, they realize that they must act quickly before the Prophet succeeds with his cruel plans.

The Sea of Storms is the first book in the Lodestone science fiction series and is written by Mark Whiteway.

 

Review

The Sea of Storms is a Fantasy-like tale taking place on another planet. It intermingles Science Fiction with the classic Fantasy quest story. There isn't a ton of futuristic devices and such in this story, so it reads more like a Fantasy novel with the main characters going after the evil leader to save their people. You know, this is the the proven Fantasy formula that has worked so well in the past with many a story in other Fantasy novels, but with a twist.

I found this book to be an interesting mixture of Science Fiction and Fantasy. Mark Whiteway says on the back cover that he built this story around the concept of negative matter, an extension of Einstein's Theory of General Relativity. You read that and you think to yourself, "Oh, no . . . what am I getting myself into?" It scares me when I read stuff like that on the back cover. It is usually from first-time writers. I understand that we are talking about the properties of the Lodestone here, but seeing a quote like this could actually scare a potential reader away. Just ignore it for now because it doesn't really matter. You don't need to know what Einstein's Theory of General Relativity is that the story is based off it, just know that the story is extremely entertaining and a fun read.

Mark Whiteway has obviously put a lot of thought in to the world of the Kelanni. He creates a sense of alieness in his world that we don't often see. There are references in the story meant to enforce the idea that these intelligent beings have developed on a world that has nothing to do with humans or the things we as a species have invented. I found that I really liked that about this story. Is the Prophet a human? Maybe . . . I don't know yet. I will have to read the next book to find out.

At first, I found the story to be a little slow. But as the characters were developing and the story was evolving, I found myself getting more and more involved in the plot. By the end of the book, I was gobbling up the words so fast that I reached the last page and wished that I had the second book in my hands. This is exactly what should happen in a terrific novel.

Overall, The Sea of Storms is a great first book in a series that has a lot of promise. I have seen series go astray, like with Eragon, and I just hope that Mark Whiteway continues to build this series in a way that keeps the storyline moving along at a good pace and the characters interesting. Action is essential to a story like this, so I hope that the action doesn't fall off to descriptive storytelling in the second book. Because I enjoyed this book so much, I cannot wait for the next book to come out. The World of Ice and Stars should be a doozy.

I rated this book an 8½ out of 10.

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