Merryll Manning:

Trapped on Mystery Island

by
John Howard Reid

Lulu Press, Inc., June 2008, 191 pp.

ISBN: 978-1-4357-2085-5

Genre: Mystery
Subgenre: Police
Reviewed: 6/29/2010

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

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Excerpt

"Blood," I said

"Well, well," came the voice of Mr. Dedham, ambling down the stairs, "so the revels commence, do they?"

"Don't let him come down please, Mrs. Lawson," I called out. "Or anyone else."

Edge was scanning the floor. "There's another lot over there, near the corridor to the chapel."

"Do you still think this is part of the game?" I whispered.

"I don't know what to think. There's not supposed to be any more activity until tomorrow morning after breakfast. But so many rules have already been broken . . ."

I sighed. "Well, I'm disqualified, and you're the referee, so let's follow it up."

"Is it really blood?"

I shrugged. "I could be animal blood. Or Red Cross blood. Or more likely stage blood. But I don't like it anyway. Let's have a look in the chapel."

"You'll find that door locked," sang out Mrs. Lawson.

But the chapel door was merely on the latch. We turned the fluted iron knob and the door swung open.

"Where are the lights?" Edge asked.

"Just inside the door." Leaning my arm through the doorway, I fumbled for the switches and turned them all on.

The chapel was bare. All the statues had gone, all the stations of the cross, the sanctuary lamp, and the holy-water font. Even the pews and the alter rails had been taken away. Only the bare floor and the marble alter, the massive lectern, the stained glass windows -- and the life-sized Father Time -- remained. And halfway down the aisle, another pool of "blood".

"Where does that door at the side lead?"

"Vestry. Priest's changing room," I explained.

Of course, all the vestments had long gone. Just empty wardrobes, and a suitcase on the bench . . .

I swung the suitcase on to the floor. A name painted in white: Fr. Connor. The catches were not secured. The case was three-quarters full of clerical clothes.

Another door led to the spartan bedroom. I rapped on it loudly, first with my knuckles and then with closed fists. "Father Connor! Father Connor!"

"Try the handle," advised Edge. "Try the bloody handle."

He wasn't swearing. The handle was covered in blood. There was no help for it. I would have to put my own fingers to it. The handle moved only slightly. I applied more pressure, clutching the handle down and heaving myself against the door. It finally thudded open.

There are nightmares that haunt the mind for years and then -- after treatment or therapy or just pure chance -- suddenly vanish and are never repeated. And there are nightmares that stubbornly occupy a pedestal in the brain from which nothing can dislodge them, save death. The sight that met my eyes in Father Connor's room will be with me until I die.

The body lay face down on the floor.

 

Synopsis

Merryll Manning, a Miami police officer, and Susan Ford, his much younger girlfriend, have paid one thousand dollars each to attend a "Mystery Weekend" on Cross Keys Island in Florida. With a prize of five thousand dollars going to the guest that figures out who the murderer is, Susan is very excited to attend the murder mystery on this Florida island.

Mr. Mystery, the owner of the island, has hired actors to pretend that they are guests. Paying guests do not know which of the other guests are actors and which are paying guests. The actors are the ones that will be pretend murdered and play the part of the fake inspector.

Merryll uses his police-trained deductive skills to figure out who the first victim will be, and he is correct. Brinton Blythe, one of the actors, borrows Father Kieran Conner's jacket to go outside for a smoke . . . and doesn't return. During a search for Brinton, they find the body of Father Connor, who has really been murdered, in the chapel. Father Connor had not been one of the paying guests nor is he one of the actors . . . he is the brother of Mr. Mystery.

Trapped on the island, with a real murderer killing people, Merryll tries to convince the other guests to listen to him, but they seem to want to follow an actor that is playing the inspector in the game. Doctor Ellis McLeod makes it plainly known that he doesn't trust Merryll and turns the guests against the police officer.

As the search continues for Brinton, Merryll is convinced that the man is dead. Just as he is about to solve the murders, he is tied up by the guests as they think that he is the murderer. With time quickly running out, Merryll realizes that he must escape from the ropes that bound him and nab the murderer before he, or she, kills again.

Merryll Manning: Trapped on Mystery Island is the first Merryll Manning Mystery book written by John Howard Reid. The series stars Merryll Manning, a Miami police officer.

 

Review

I love to sit down and read a good mystery novel. I love the tension that fills these types of books as the main character tries to figure out who the guilty party is. Agatha Christie was the master of this type of story, which is why I absolutely adore her. With her highly interesting main characters of Hercule Poirot and Miss Jane Marple, you knew that you were always in for an thrilling read.

Merryll Manning: Trapped on Mystery Island is the first book about Merryll Manning and it has a lot of the elements that I look for in a good mystery. Of course, there is the murder, of which we have a couple. There is the unknown motive and the question of who is the murderer, one of which I figured out right away, but didn't have any proof until the end. There is also the group of wacky suspects, in which there are quite a few here.

One thing was missing from this murder mystery that I felt was very necessary to have. The question I kept asking myself was, "Who is Merryll Manning?" I was never sure through the entire story if he was a real police office or one of the actors. This occurred because the author never really tells us much about who Merryll Manning is. Is he really a police officer? How old is he? What is his rank? Where exactly does he live? What kind of police officer is he? Is he a detective or on street patrol? All of these are questions that I really wanted answered. We never really get to know the man himself, so I had a hard time bonding with him. So, who is Merryll Manning? I really cannot answer that question at this time.

Thank goodness there was a list of characters at the beginning of the story, something Agatha Christie used to do. I love having this list of characters. I found myself constantly going back to this list to see who someone was. I did wish for a little more description for each character, though.

The story itself is interesting and moves along at a nice pace. I enjoyed the quick dialog and appreciated that the story wasn't overly descriptive. I kept waiting for someone to get murdered, and when it did happen, I though Manning would take over, but he didn't. He tried, but no one listened to him. Maybe he should have had his badge and gun with him. Oh, and he didn't have a gun. I know a lot of police officers. They always bring a gun with them everywhere they go. So, where was Merryll's gun?

One other thing about this story that makes it a little tough for someone from the United States to read. There are a quite a few phrases that are used that do not translate well into American English. I would reread these sentences and try to figure out exactly what John Howard Reid meant, but would often have to give up and move on. It is too bad that these phases were not Americanized so I could understand them.

Overall, Merryll Manning: Trapped on Mystery Island is a good first book in a mystery series that has a lot of promise. The story could have been a lot better if the reader could have gotten to know more about the main character, so they could bond with him. Maybe we will learn more about Merryll Manning in his second book: Merryll Manning: The Health Farm Murders. I look forward to it.

I rated this book a 7 out of 10.

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