The Wrath of Zar

(The Demons of Destiny - Book 1)

by
Shayne Easson

WestBank Publishing, November 2007, 290 pp.
ISBN: 0-9789840-1-3

Genre: Fantasy

Reviewed: 3/29/2008

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

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Excerpt

Demon Attack

The remaining windows blew open. The demons hurled themselves in one at a time. Leahla charged. She spun and kicked. Her sword lopped off a head and she stabbed another. More came. They busted through the walls. A crash at the front door warned Adan there were demons on the other side. They were trapped. Four demons jumped at Leahla. Adan hugged Maureen, waiting for the moment they would die. From every direction demons rushed in for the kill.

The door to the house flew open, followed by an undulating war cry. Myron rushed in, his crossbow aimed their way. He fired; the arrow ripped into a demon's head. Its body dropped to the floor with a thud.

"Maureen!" Myron yelled as he reloaded.

Aren rushed in behind Myron with both swords drawn cutting down their foes. As Adan and Maureen moved closer to protection, Leahla struggled in the corner. Myron moved in front of Maureen and Adan while Aren leapt behind them and saved their backs. Leahla killed another and she joined them by the door.

Adan counted six more demons. They charged Aren at the same time, hissing and screaming with their claws pointed at his neck.

"Aren!" Aden yelled.

But his brother was a marvel as heads were severed, arms and claws hacked off. Leahla moved in next to Aren. Together, they slaughtered the last of the demons.

Aren, breathing hard, sheathed his swords. "Are you two all right?" he asked Adan and Maureen. Blood streamed down the side of his face. Adan nodded and took Maureen by her hand.

"We have to get out of here," Myron said. "They're everywhere."

 

Synopsis

Twenty-three years ago, the Warriors of Ches were charged by their god Faral to find and secure an artifact. Failure to do so would end in the destruction of the world. They did fail. Now the demons have awakened and the vengeance of Faris, Faral's brother and enemy is being waged upon the surviving Warriors, their families and the places they live. The Warriors have kept their past secret and have led productive and peaceful lives. Some are leaders and even kings.

On the night of an annual festival, the home and town of Darren Caynne, formally a Warrior of Ches, is targeted by the demons, and the town is all but destroyed. Adan Caynne, a twin son of Darren is the only one left of his family. After the attack, Adan has a dream that his younger brother, Dex is still alive but in peril.

Adan leaves the wreckage of his home and village and sets out to find his brother. Before he can go far, Myron, a friend and brother to a girl Adan is in love with, insists on going with him. Myron is a "never miss" with the crossbow and trained in fighting. Adan is not a fighter but he now has his father's sword-the Dragon Sword that has a secret his father had kept hidden.

While Adan and Myron are searching aimlessly for Dex, more towns and families are being attacked. Other family members of the Warriors of Ches have left their besieged homes, intent upon their own missions-but all with a common enemy: the Demon Vayle and his Dryden warriors. When Adan and the others find themselves together and on the same quest-to find answers to the betrayals and deceptions that have come to light-the adventures begin.

The Wrath of Zar is the first book in The Demons of Destiny fantasy series by Shayne Easson.

 

Review

At first, I was really into the story in The Wrath of Zar. I sort of liked the main character, Aden, but also thought he was a quite wimpy. His brother Aren was really cool until he was killed. But after the first sixty pages or so, the focus of the story shifts to Prince Riordan Adynall for about 30 pages, then goes back to Aden again for a few chapters.

Then the story focuses on Princess Karyna. After 20 or so pages of this, my interest really started to wane. I started reading less and less pages every day. First it was 15, then ten, then five, until finally I just stood there looking at the book thinking, "I have absolutely no interest in this story whatsoever." Its too bad because I rarely give up on a book, but I just couldn't read it anymore. I was bored silly.

I always find it so hard when the story goes away from a main character for such a long period of time. Plus, the main character is not very likable and I didn't really bond with him at all. It is hard when the main character starts off as a gutless coward in a Fantasy book. Sure, some kind of magical beam did shoot out of his chest and kill a demon, but then Aden never really thought about it very much afterward. Hmmm . . . if something like that happened to me, I sure would try to figure out what happened. Wouldn't you?

As for Princess Karyna, I didn't find myself caring about her at all. I did like Prince Riordan, but we really didn't get to know him much at all either before he was wrongly hailed off to jail.

Overall, The Wrath of Zar just didn't do it for me at all.

I rated this book a 4 out of 10.

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