Traitor's Moon

(Book Three of The Nightrunner Series)
by
Lynn Flewelling

Bantam Spectra, July 1999, 540 pp.
ISBN: 0-553-57725-5

Genre: Fantasy

Reviewed: 5/4/2003

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

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Excerpt

"Archers at the ready!" Klia shouted from the forecastle deck. "Shoot at will!"

Alec chose a man on the foredeck of the enemy vessel, drew the Black Radly's bowstring to his ear, and released the first shaft. Not pausing to see if it struck home, he drew one arrow after another and sent them speeding across the water. Beside him, Seregil and the archers of Urgazhi Turma did the same, each setting their own grim rhythm as the great ship closed on them.

Enemy shafts were flying around their ears now, thudding into the deck and the wooden shields mounted on the rail. The hissing song of the string and shaft was soon joined by the first cries of the wounded.

As the ship loomed ever closer, Alec spotted what appeared to be the bronze heads of some sort of monster mounted below the forecastle rail. The placement seemed too strategic to be more decoration, but he couldn't imagine what they could be.

He was about to point them out to the others when Seregil let out a startled curse and staggered back, struck in the right shoulder by a blue-fletched Plenimaran arrow.

"How bad?" Alec demanded, pulling him to shelter against the rail.

"Not so bad," Seregil hissed through gritted teeth, yanking the shaft out with surprising ease. The thick leather strap of his quiver and the mail beneath his coat had prevented the head from piercing his shoulder, but the arrow had struck hard enough to drive the metal rings of the mail through the shirt below, leaving a bloody dent in his shoulder mere inches from his throat.

He handed the enemy shaft to Alec with a wry grimace. "Send this back to its owner for me, will you?"

Standing up, Alec nocked the shaft and raised his bow to take aim at the vessel looming over them now. Before he could draw, however, the bronze heads of the Plenimaran's port side suddenly spewed streams of liquid fire. It struck the rigging overhead and fresh screams burst out. A sailor fell to the deck, neck snapped like an oak stalk. Another hung tangled and screaming in the yards, sheathed in flame. Fire crews clambered up with buckets of sand and urine to douse smoking holes in the sails.

Aboard the Plenimaran ship, marines jeered and waved.

"What's that?" cried Alec, ducking down in alarm again.

"Bilairy's Balls!" gasped Seregil, grey eyes wide with astonishment. "The Fire. They've learned to pump it, the clever bastards!"

 

Synopsis

Over a year after the war with the Plenimarians began, Queen Idrilain of Skala is mortally wounded in battle. Knowing she is dying, and that they are losing the war, she realizes that she will need the help of the Aurenfaie to defeat Plenimar. She decided to send a delegation into Aurenen and it will be lead by her youngest daughter, Klia, with the help of Beka and her horse troops for protection.

Knowing that they may need an expert on the Aurenfaie, Queen Idrilain first sends Micum and Beka to track down Seregil and Alec in Mycena. Seregil, an exile of Aurenen for murdering a man in his youth, realizes that he may never have a chance to return to his homeland, agrees to accompany Klia. Seregil is still fighting his won personal demons after having to kill his mentor a year ago and no longer weilds a sword, a skill he is most reknown for.

With Alec at his side, Klia and her delegation travel into the land of the long-lived Aurenfaie with the hope of gaining an ally. Meanwhile, the queen's oldest daughter, Phoria, is grooming herself to become the new Queen of Skala and cares little for the Aurenfaie or what they could possible do to help them. With her brother, Korathan, by her side, she has plans of her own on how to win this war. Little does Klia, Seregil, Alec and Beka know that it has nothing to do with them.

Traitor's Moon by Lynn Flewelling is the third book in the Nightrunner Series. This story takes place about one year after the end of the second book in this series, Stalking Darkness. The war between Plenimar and Skala is not going well for the Skalians, and Seregil must return to Aurenen to face his darkest fears. The main characters are: Seregil - a long-lived Aurenen thief and all-around rascal, Alex - Seregil's talented young apprentice, Klia - the youngest daughter of Queen Idrilain, Beka - Micum's daughter and lieutenant in the Queen's Horse, and Nyal - an Aurenfaie who acts as the delegations interpreter.

 

Review

Having read the previous two books in this series, Luck in the Shadows and Stalking Darkness, I was quite pleased to return to the war-ravaged land of Seregil and Alex. Although not an action-packed novel, we finally get the whole story on why Seregil was exiled from Aurenen all those years ago and some of the holes from the first two stories are finally filled in.

The mystery of the Aurenfaie has been hinted at, and I was glad to finally get to know more about them. My one complaint is the amount of Aurenfaie words that Lynn Flewelling uses in her story. There were quite a few of them and I usually glazed over them because I had totally forgotten what they meant.

I found this to be a little frustrating. A glossary at the end of the book with the definitions of Aurenfaie words would have been very helpful in my understanding of the story. Flewelling's writing style has grown more fluid with her third book and the storytelling weaves a complicated plot that will keep the reader interested. The history lessons sometimes seem a little long-winded, but they can be over-looked by the excellent character development.

I did quite enjoy my reading of Traitor's Moon, but also found it to be the weakest of the first three books in the series. I never got deeply involved in the book like I did with Stalking Darkness.

Overall, the Nightrunner series is a good read and should not be missed by a reader of fantasy. It isn't quite the same as all that other fantasy on the shelf and offers something new and refreshing for the readers. I do hope that she plans on writing more books in this series and delving deeper into Alec's genealogy.

I rated this book a 7½ out of 10.

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2003