The Grand Design

(Book Two of Tyrants and Kings)
by
John Marco

Spectra, April 2000, 573 pp.
ISBN: 0-553-38022-2

Genre: Fantasy

Subgenre: Military

Reviewed: 1/1/2000

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

Book Cover

Excerpt

Deep in the Woods outside Falindar…

”Fire,” Simon whispered.

Nearby? He cocked his head to listen, heard the breeze and the chirping of birds. Up ahead was another line of trees—big pines a mile deep. Guessing the smell was coming from the forest, he approached it warily. Then he caught the first sight of smoke. White and thin. And close by. A campfire, certainly. Simon steadied himself. He would go around, he decided, and avoid whoever was here. But when he turned to go he saw a man with an arm full of firewood.

Simon froze.

The man dropped the firewood and stood gaping at him. Not Triin. Simon didn’t move.

Not bloody Triin!

”Who the hell are you?” barked the man. He was shorter than Simon but broader in the shoulders, dark-haired, and as he spoke he surged forward, one arm reaching for his blade. Simon put up his hands, his mind groping for his pretext—the one he’d rehearsed so long.

”Don’t you move!” the man roared. He had his broadsword drawn and held it out in both hands. Simon raised his hands higher above his head.

”Easy,” he urged. “Take it easy….”

The man was dressed like a Triin, but was unmistakably Naren. Simon stopped moving backward and let the stranger approach.

”I’m unarmed,” he said loudly. “Just a dagger, in my belt. A dagger, all right?”

”Don’t you move,” repeated the man. He had the tip of his sword at Simon’s throat now. “Or I swear to God I’ll cut your miserable throat!”

”I’m not moving,” said Simon. “Not a hair.”

The man looked him up and down, then his hand flashed out and grabbed hold of Simon’s collar. He dragged Simon to his knees, then flung him down. Simon’s chest hit the ground with a painful thud. The man put his foot on his throat and leaned.

”Stop!” Simon gasped.

”Shut up!” snapped the stranger. He bent down and fixed his knee into Simon’s back, pressing down hard and putting the edge of his sword to Simon’s throat. With his other hand he grabbed a fistful of hair and jerked back Simon’s head.

”Who the hell are you? Tell me quick or I’ll break your neck.”

 

Synopsis

Richius “The Jackal” Vantran lives in Lucel-Lor in the city of Falendar with his wife, Dyana, and his infant daughter, Shani. But something is bothering Richius, and he is not happy there. He knows the Biagio, who blames Richius for the death of Arkus, will never be satisfied until he has his revenge upon Richius.

Biagio does in fact want Richius, and he plans on kidnapping Richius’ daughter to draw Richius to Crote, where Biagio is living. Biagio is in a power struggle with Bishop Herrith, who has sworn that he hears the voice of God and is ridding Nar of Arkus’ Black Renaissance, which Biagio wants to preserve. Biagio sends Simon, one of his Roshann agents, to kidnap Shani and Simon fools Richius into trusting him.

Meanwhile, Vorto, Herrith’s commander of the Nar military, is wiping out cities that fly the flag of the Black Renaissance by using Formula 2, an extremely deadly chemical. And Biagio has Nicabar, the head of the Narran fleet, protecting Crote and attacking Lissian ships whenever he runs across them. Richius soon travels to Liss to help train the Lissian military to attack Crote and Biagio. But little does he know that Simon snatches his daughter and other Roshann agents also take his wife back to Crote when they find Richius is gone to Liss.

The Grand Design is the second novel in the Tyrants and Kings series. The first was The Jackal of Nar. This book is a military fantasy novel that takes place in the world created in the first book of the series. Marco delves into the characters deeper in his second book and reveals more about the world that they live in. You learn more about the church, the power struggles in the land of Nar, not only with Biagio and Herrith, but also with the other lords, and Biagio, who has a much bigger role in this story then the last.

The war scenes can be extremely harsh and Marco shows war for what it really is…incredibly nasty. The characters in this book are extremely ruthless and hungry for either power or land. Revenge is the central theme of The Grand Design. Biagio want revenge on Richius. Richius wants revenge on Biagio. One of the twin brothers of Dragon’s Beak wants revenge upon his own brother. A toymaker wants revenge upon Herrith. At first it is hard to define who the bud guy is in the story, but as the plot thickens, you learn that Biagio has a plan, a grand design, to not only enact his revenge upon Richius, but also to get Herrith and have himself take Arkus’ place as Emperor.

 

Review

Like the first book, I really enjoyed The Grand Design. The Grand Design is a well-written military fantasy that will quench the thirst of both military and fantasy fans. The plots are intricate and well though out. The characters are better developed and the pace of the story is perfect.

The tension that Marco creates lasts throughout the story from beginning to end. I swear, I was always anxious to read more and find out what was going to happen. And I was never disappointed with the unfolding of the events in the story. But beware, unlike a lot of tales, since this is a military novel, a lot of the characters die. I found that to be quite a shock, and sometimes I was disappointed when a specific character died.

But overall, The Grand Design is an excellent sequel to The Jackal of Nar and I look forward to the next book with a wetted appetite.

I rated this book a 9 out of 10.

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