Befiddled

by
Pedro de Alcantara

Delacorte Press, November 2005, 183 pp.
ISBN: 0-385-73265-1

Genre: Young Reader
Subgenres: Fiction
Reviewed: 2/15/2006

Reviewed by: Conan Tigard

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The competition was in less than ten days.

Becky was getting nervous, and put herself in a mood to moan and groan.

She sat on the couch and fidgeted with an embroidered cushion. "My teeth are so crooked," she said. "And my belly sticks out." Mr. Freeman just listened and uh-huhed, nodding in agreement with every complaint.

"I have nothing to wear to the competition."

"Uh-huh."

"My shoes are ugly."

"Uh-huh."

"I have a zit on my nose."

"Uh-huh."

"My hair is so gross, I hate it."

"I could cut your hair, Becky," Mr. Freeman finally said. "If you wanted me to," he added, almost inaudibly.

"Cut my hair?" Becky put the cushion down. "How would you do that?"

"With a comb and a pair of scissors," he replied with a chuckle.

Becky brought her hands to her hair and pulled on it. "But you're not a hairdresser."

"I cut Agatha's hair a few hundred times," he said, still patient.

"Her hair was not like mine."

"No denying that."

"Hers was thick and curly, you told me."

'I did."

"Mine is fine and scraggly."

"Sure is."

"Maybe if I used some gel I won't need a haircut."

"Maybe."

"If you pulled my hair it would hurt."

"It would."

"You might poke me in the eye with the scissors."

'I might."

"If you got it wrong my hair would look worse."

'You bet."

 

Review

Becky Cohen is a 13-year old girl who loves to play the violin. She doesn't really have any good friends her age and is teased by all the kids at school. Her younger brother, Benjy, love to write and has created his own monthly newsletter entitled, "The Splinter." He writes about the things that happen at school, usually making everything up, and always features an article about his sister. Becky befriends the new building handyman, Mr. Freeman, who also used to play music. He begins teaching her how to feel the music . . . to feel it deep in her soul. They soon become fast friends and she starts taking free lessons from him. Becky learns of an upcoming competition, but knows that her stage fright ruins every performance she has ever given. With the help of Mr. Freeman, she starts working toward her goal to be able to play well in front of an audience.

Befiddled is a fictional tale by Pedro de Alcantara. It is the story of a teenage girl struggling to fit in with her schoolmates while trying to work on her self-esteem. This book is intended for readers aged 10 to 14.

It is tough when no one listens to you. It is tough when you get so nervous in front of people that you always choke under pressure. It is tough when you don't have a best friend. It is tough being Becky Cohen. Becky is a very talented violin player, but has a meek personality that causes her not be be noticed, and if she is noticed, it isn't for something good. In Befiddled, Becky struggles to overcome her issues and become the great musician she knows she can be. This being the first published novel by Pedro de Alcantara, I found myself pleasantly surprised by the wonderful flow of the story. I absolutely loved the characters and enjoyed the pacing. Overall, I found Befiddled to be a wonderful story that can be enjoyed by all ages of readers, not just young adults. I look forward to more novels written by Pedro de Alcantara.

I rated this book an 8½ out of 10.

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